very good story.. I wish it would've been an episode. I always wanted her to come back. super disappointed on how they ended her storyline :( but I think I'm not alone with my anger for TPTB *g*

i liked how john reacted to her coming back but i was missing his "love" a little bit... a bit of UST would've been nice aswell as a longer end scene. you were very quick with the "happily ever after"; i felt like i missed out on something romantic. BUT on the other hand you wrote a sparky fic in a
'sparky drought' so big plus points for that :D