Thank you, I'm incredibly glad you liked it!! I'm fascinated by Qetesh, it was a shame that issue was barely addressed in the show (but I have high hopes for Continuum), and I jumped at the chance to go a little more in depth with Vala.

I wasn't sure about the ending, I had this idea in my mind and I couldn't really think up anything different and plausible, so I took that road. I'm glad you appreciated. :)